GPT - 3 - Opinion

نوع رایتینگ: Task 2 | نمره (Band Score): 8.0

متن اصلی نمونه

In many modern economies, employees spend the majority of their week at work, often leaving little time for rest or personal growth. Some people believe that reducing the length of the working week and extending the weekend would improve both productivity and quality of life. I strongly agree with this idea because shorter weeks can enhance mental health and boost overall efficiency.
The primary reason for supporting a shorter workweek is its positive effect on physical and mental well-being. Long hours often lead to stress, burnout, and health problems such as insomnia or heart disease. Countries that have experimented with four-day weeks, such as several European nations, report higher job satisfaction and lower rates of absenteeism. When employees are well-rested, they return to work more focused and creative. This clearly shows that granting workers a longer weekend can reduce healthcare costs and create a happier, healthier workforce.
Furthermore, reducing weekly hours can actually increase productivity. Research from pilot programs consistently finds that when employees have fewer days to complete tasks, they manage their time more efficiently and eliminate unnecessary meetings. For instance, companies in the technology sector that adopted a 32-hour week have often maintained or even improved output while reducing staff turnover. Consequently, a shorter week benefits both employers and employees by improving performance and lowering recruitment costs.
In conclusion, I believe that shortening the working week and providing a longer weekend is advantageous for both individuals and organizations. It safeguards health while encouraging higher productivity and employee loyalty. Unless future evidence proves otherwise, adopting a more balanced schedule is a logical step toward a sustainable and satisfying work life.

پاراگراف‌نویسی تقلیدی (Paraphrasing & Imitation)

یک پاراگراف از نمونه بالا را انتخاب کنید. سعی کنید همان ایده را با کلمات و ساختار متفاوت بنویسید.

Outline Writing (طرح کلی مقاله)

به جای نوشتن کامل رایتینگ، فقط طرح کلی مقاله را بنویسید. (مقدمه: سوال بازنویسی شده + تز؛ پاراگراف‌های بدنه: جمله موضوعی + 2 ایده پشتیبان؛ نتیجه‌گیری: خلاصه + نتیجه‌گیری نهایی).

Reverse Engineering (حدس سوال اصلی)

با خواندن متن نمونه، سعی کنید سوال اصلی رایتینگ را خودتان حدس بزنید. (مثال: Some people believe that... Discuss both views and give your own opinion.)

Writing & Comparing (نوشتن و مقایسه)

یک سوال از تسک 1 یا 2 انتخاب کنید و پاسخ کامل خود را بنویسید. سپس آن را با نمونه نمره بالا مقایسه کنید. (این بخش فقط برای نوشتن پاسخ شماست)

تمرین واژگان موضوعی (Topic-based Vocabulary)

واژگان موضوعی یا اصطلاحات مفید را از این نمونه استخراج کنید. آن‌ها را بررسی کرده و جملات جدیدی با آن‌ها بسازید.

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