GPT - 22 - Discussion

نوع رایتینگ: task2 | نمره (Band Score): 8.0

متن اصلی نمونه

Environmental problems have become a major concern in recent decades, and people have different opinions about which issues are the most serious. Some argue that the loss of particular species of plants and animals is the main problem, while others believe that other environmental issues, such as pollution or climate change, are more important. I think both perspectives have merit, but the broader problems pose a greater threat to life on Earth.

On the one hand, the extinction of certain species is a serious issue. Each plant or animal plays a role in its ecosystem, and losing a species can disrupt natural balance. For example, the disappearance of bees affects pollination, which in turn reduces food production for humans. Protecting endangered species is therefore important to maintain biodiversity and ensure healthy ecosystems.

On the other hand, larger environmental problems such as air and water pollution, global warming, and deforestation have far-reaching effects on the planet. Pollution affects human health directly, while climate change increases the frequency of extreme weather events, which can destroy habitats and threaten both humans and wildlife. For instance, rising temperatures can cause polar ice to melt, putting many species at risk and also affecting human communities.

In my opinion, while the loss of species is important, broader issues like climate change and pollution are more urgent because they affect the entire planet and can lead to the extinction of many species at once. Addressing these larger problems can also help protect individual species indirectly.

In conclusion, both species loss and other environmental challenges are serious, but tackling major global issues should be a priority to ensure the survival of ecosystems and humanity.

پاراگراف‌نویسی تقلیدی (Paraphrasing & Imitation)

یک پاراگراف از نمونه بالا را انتخاب کنید. سعی کنید همان ایده را با کلمات و ساختار متفاوت بنویسید.

Outline Writing (طرح کلی مقاله)

به جای نوشتن کامل رایتینگ، فقط طرح کلی مقاله را بنویسید. (مقدمه: سوال بازنویسی شده + تز؛ پاراگراف‌های بدنه: جمله موضوعی + 2 ایده پشتیبان؛ نتیجه‌گیری: خلاصه + نتیجه‌گیری نهایی).

Reverse Engineering (حدس سوال اصلی)

با خواندن متن نمونه، سعی کنید سوال اصلی رایتینگ را خودتان حدس بزنید. (مثال: Some people believe that... Discuss both views and give your own opinion.)

Writing & Comparing (نوشتن و مقایسه)

یک سوال از تسک 1 یا 2 انتخاب کنید و پاسخ کامل خود را بنویسید. سپس آن را با نمونه نمره بالا مقایسه کنید. (این بخش فقط برای نوشتن پاسخ شماست)

تمرین واژگان موضوعی (Topic-based Vocabulary)

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