GPT - 26 - Problem

نوع رایتینگ: task2 | نمره (Band Score): 8.0

متن اصلی نمونه

Nowadays, many businesses emphasise in their advertising that their products are new or improved in some way. This trend has become very common, and it is mainly due to marketing strategies aimed at attracting consumers and increasing sales. In my opinion, this development has both positive and negative aspects, but overall it is more beneficial than harmful.

One main reason companies focus on novelty is to attract attention and encourage purchases. Consumers are often interested in the latest products, whether it is a new smartphone, a car model, or a fashion item. By highlighting new features or improvements, businesses can persuade people that their product is better than older models or competitors. For example, advertisements for smartphones often emphasise better cameras, faster processors, or longer battery life, which can influence buyers’ decisions.

Another reason is that promoting newness helps companies maintain their brand image and stay competitive. In fast-moving industries, consumers expect constant innovation. Advertising new features shows that a company is modern, active, and responsive to customer needs. This can increase customer loyalty and trust in the brand.

However, there are also some drawbacks. Constant emphasis on “new” products can encourage unnecessary spending and create pressure to always buy the latest items. Consumers may feel dissatisfied with older products even if they are still functional.

In conclusion, highlighting novelty in advertising is generally positive because it motivates companies to innovate and informs consumers about improvements. However, people should be aware of marketing strategies and make careful decisions to avoid unnecessary consumption.

پاراگراف‌نویسی تقلیدی (Paraphrasing & Imitation)

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Outline Writing (طرح کلی مقاله)

به جای نوشتن کامل رایتینگ، فقط طرح کلی مقاله را بنویسید. (مقدمه: سوال بازنویسی شده + تز؛ پاراگراف‌های بدنه: جمله موضوعی + 2 ایده پشتیبان؛ نتیجه‌گیری: خلاصه + نتیجه‌گیری نهایی).

Reverse Engineering (حدس سوال اصلی)

با خواندن متن نمونه، سعی کنید سوال اصلی رایتینگ را خودتان حدس بزنید. (مثال: Some people believe that... Discuss both views and give your own opinion.)

Writing & Comparing (نوشتن و مقایسه)

یک سوال از تسک 1 یا 2 انتخاب کنید و پاسخ کامل خود را بنویسید. سپس آن را با نمونه نمره بالا مقایسه کنید. (این بخش فقط برای نوشتن پاسخ شماست)

تمرین واژگان موضوعی (Topic-based Vocabulary)

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