GPT - 9 - Discussion

نوع رایتینگ: Task 2 | نمره (Band Score): 8.0

متن اصلی نمونه

Introduction
Competition is a common feature of modern life, appearing in schools, workplaces, and everyday situations. While some people believe that competing is beneficial, others argue that cooperation should be prioritized instead. This essay will examine both perspectives and present my own opinion.

Body Paragraph 1 – Competition is Beneficial
On the one hand, competition can motivate individuals to perform at their best and achieve higher standards. When people strive to outdo others, they often work harder, improve skills, and reach their potential. For example, students competing for scholarships may dedicate more time to studying and developing extracurricular skills. Supporters of this view argue that healthy competition encourages innovation, personal growth, and productivity, which benefits both individuals and society.

Body Paragraph 2 – Cooperation is Preferable
On the other hand, excessive competition can create stress, conflict, and inequality, whereas cooperation promotes teamwork and collective success. By working together, people share knowledge, support one another, and achieve goals more efficiently. For instance, collaborative projects in workplaces often produce better outcomes than individual efforts alone, as team members contribute diverse ideas and skills. Advocates of cooperation suggest that building strong relationships and mutual understanding is more valuable in the long term than simply outperforming others.

Conclusion
In conclusion, while competition can drive achievement and personal development, cooperation fosters teamwork, harmony, and shared success. I believe a balanced approach is best: people should embrace competition to improve themselves but also cooperate to benefit others and society as a whole.

پاراگراف‌نویسی تقلیدی (Paraphrasing & Imitation)

یک پاراگراف از نمونه بالا را انتخاب کنید. سعی کنید همان ایده را با کلمات و ساختار متفاوت بنویسید.

Outline Writing (طرح کلی مقاله)

به جای نوشتن کامل رایتینگ، فقط طرح کلی مقاله را بنویسید. (مقدمه: سوال بازنویسی شده + تز؛ پاراگراف‌های بدنه: جمله موضوعی + 2 ایده پشتیبان؛ نتیجه‌گیری: خلاصه + نتیجه‌گیری نهایی).

Reverse Engineering (حدس سوال اصلی)

با خواندن متن نمونه، سعی کنید سوال اصلی رایتینگ را خودتان حدس بزنید. (مثال: Some people believe that... Discuss both views and give your own opinion.)

Writing & Comparing (نوشتن و مقایسه)

یک سوال از تسک 1 یا 2 انتخاب کنید و پاسخ کامل خود را بنویسید. سپس آن را با نمونه نمره بالا مقایسه کنید. (این بخش فقط برای نوشتن پاسخ شماست)

تمرین واژگان موضوعی (Topic-based Vocabulary)

واژگان موضوعی یا اصطلاحات مفید را از این نمونه استخراج کنید. آن‌ها را بررسی کرده و جملات جدیدی با آن‌ها بسازید.

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