GPT - 13 - Opinion
نوع رایتینگ: task2 | نمره (Band Score): 8.0
متن اصلی نمونه
Introduction Around the world, many rural residents are relocating to cities, leading to declining populations in the countryside. Some people view this as a positive development because of economic opportunities, while others see it as a negative trend due to social and environmental consequences. I believe that, on balance, this migration has more disadvantages than advantages. Body Paragraph 1 – Positive Aspects On the one hand, moving to urban areas can offer clear benefits for individuals and the economy. Cities provide better access to jobs, education, and healthcare, which can improve living standards. For example, young people from rural areas often move to cities to pursue higher education or specialized careers that are unavailable locally. Supporters argue that this trend can stimulate economic growth and innovation, as a concentrated workforce encourages entrepreneurship and cultural exchange. Body Paragraph 2 – Negative Aspects On the other hand, rural depopulation creates serious problems. Small towns and villages may face labor shortages in agriculture, decline of local services, and the loss of community traditions. For instance, many remote villages experience school closures and limited medical facilities because so few people remain. Additionally, overcrowding in cities can lead to housing shortages, pollution, and increased pressure on infrastructure. These issues suggest that the disadvantages of rural-to-urban migration are substantial. Conclusion In conclusion, while migration to cities can offer economic and educational opportunities, it also causes rural decline and urban challenges. I believe the negative consequences outweigh the positives, and governments should implement policies to support rural communities and balance population distribution.
پاراگرافنویسی تقلیدی (Paraphrasing & Imitation)
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Outline Writing (طرح کلی مقاله)
به جای نوشتن کامل رایتینگ، فقط طرح کلی مقاله را بنویسید. (مقدمه: سوال بازنویسی شده + تز؛ پاراگرافهای بدنه: جمله موضوعی + 2 ایده پشتیبان؛ نتیجهگیری: خلاصه + نتیجهگیری نهایی).
Reverse Engineering (حدس سوال اصلی)
با خواندن متن نمونه، سعی کنید سوال اصلی رایتینگ را خودتان حدس بزنید. (مثال: Some people believe that... Discuss both views and give your own opinion.)
Writing & Comparing (نوشتن و مقایسه)
یک سوال از تسک 1 یا 2 انتخاب کنید و پاسخ کامل خود را بنویسید. سپس آن را با نمونه نمره بالا مقایسه کنید. (این بخش فقط برای نوشتن پاسخ شماست)
تمرین واژگان موضوعی (Topic-based Vocabulary)
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