GPT - 23 - Discussion

نوع رایتینگ: task2 | نمره (Band Score): 8.0

متن اصلی نمونه

In life, people sometimes face difficult situations, such as an unsatisfactory job or financial difficulties. Some argue that it is better to accept these problems and adapt, while others believe it is important to try to improve the situation. I think both views have merits, but in general, making an effort to improve one’s circumstances is more beneficial.

On the one hand, accepting a difficult situation can reduce stress and prevent disappointment. For example, if someone cannot find a better job immediately, accepting their current position may help them stay calm and avoid frustration. Similarly, during temporary financial problems, adjusting spending habits and living within one’s means can reduce anxiety. In some cases, acceptance allows people to focus on small positives in life rather than constantly worrying about what they cannot change.

On the other hand, trying to improve a bad situation can lead to personal growth and better outcomes. For instance, someone who is unhappy with their job may learn new skills, apply for promotions, or even change careers. Over time, these efforts can result in higher income, more satisfaction, and increased confidence. Likewise, taking active steps to manage finances, such as finding additional work or creating a budget, can help people overcome money shortages and become more independent.

In my opinion, while acceptance can be useful temporarily, actively trying to improve a difficult situation usually leads to better long-term results. Effort, determination, and problem-solving allow people to take control of their lives and create more opportunities for success.

In conclusion, both acceptance and action have roles in managing difficult situations, but striving for improvement is generally the most effective approach.

پاراگراف‌نویسی تقلیدی (Paraphrasing & Imitation)

یک پاراگراف از نمونه بالا را انتخاب کنید. سعی کنید همان ایده را با کلمات و ساختار متفاوت بنویسید.

Outline Writing (طرح کلی مقاله)

به جای نوشتن کامل رایتینگ، فقط طرح کلی مقاله را بنویسید. (مقدمه: سوال بازنویسی شده + تز؛ پاراگراف‌های بدنه: جمله موضوعی + 2 ایده پشتیبان؛ نتیجه‌گیری: خلاصه + نتیجه‌گیری نهایی).

Reverse Engineering (حدس سوال اصلی)

با خواندن متن نمونه، سعی کنید سوال اصلی رایتینگ را خودتان حدس بزنید. (مثال: Some people believe that... Discuss both views and give your own opinion.)

Writing & Comparing (نوشتن و مقایسه)

یک سوال از تسک 1 یا 2 انتخاب کنید و پاسخ کامل خود را بنویسید. سپس آن را با نمونه نمره بالا مقایسه کنید. (این بخش فقط برای نوشتن پاسخ شماست)

تمرین واژگان موضوعی (Topic-based Vocabulary)

واژگان موضوعی یا اصطلاحات مفید را از این نمونه استخراج کنید. آن‌ها را بررسی کرده و جملات جدیدی با آن‌ها بسازید.

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