Claude - 17 - Opinion
نوع رایتینگ: task2 | نمره (Band Score): 8.0
متن اصلی نمونه
Advances in technology are making driverless vehicles a realistic possibility in the near future. While some people worry about the safety and reliability of autonomous transportation, others believe it will revolutionize how we travel. I strongly agree that the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages because they will significantly reduce traffic accidents and provide greater mobility for people who cannot drive. The primary reason for my position is that autonomous vehicles will make roads much safer by eliminating human error. Statistics show that over 90% of car accidents are caused by human mistakes such as distracted driving, speeding, or driving under the influence of alcohol. Self-driving cars use sensors, cameras, and computer systems that can react faster than humans and never get tired or distracted. For example, if a child suddenly runs into the street, an autonomous vehicle can detect the danger and brake within milliseconds, much faster than any human driver could respond. Additionally, these vehicles can communicate with each other to avoid collisions and optimize traffic flow. This clearly demonstrates that removing human error from driving will save thousands of lives every year and make transportation far safer for everyone. Furthermore, driverless vehicles will provide independence and freedom to people who currently cannot drive. Many elderly people, individuals with disabilities, and children depend on others for transportation, which limits their ability to work, socialize, or access essential services. With autonomous vehicles, these groups will be able to travel whenever they need without relying on family members or expensive taxi services. For instance, an elderly person living alone could use a self-driving car to visit the doctor, shop for groceries, or meet friends without asking for help. This technology will also benefit parents who spend hours every day driving their children to school and activities. Consequently, driverless vehicles will improve quality of life for millions of people and create a more inclusive society. In conclusion, I maintain that autonomous vehicles offer overwhelming benefits for society. The combination of dramatically improved road safety and increased mobility for vulnerable groups makes this technology extremely valuable. Unless unforeseen technical problems prove impossible to solve, I believe that driverless vehicles will make transportation safer, more convenient, and more accessible for everyone.
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